After getting my feedback from the class I realised that I needed to pick between Facebook and Twitter before I can take my designs any further. Looking through my book at my designs and proposed slogans I will need to make a decision through the ones I think are stronger.
For this design I feel that it would work best with Twitter this is because my slogan for Twitter would be "what did YOU tweet today Daddy?" while my Facebook slogan would be "What is YOUR status today Daddy" I feel that the Twitter slogan keeps more of the originals personality as it wouldn't be changing the "YOU" to a "YOUR", for this reason Twitter has one vote.
For this poster design I could again use both Facebook or Twitter, the jacket could easily be changed into both the Facebook or Twitter blues and the slogans for each site are very similar. This one is hard to judge so I will have to call it a draw.
This poster was again made for both Facebook and Twitter. My slogans are similar but slightly better towards Facebook. I also think this image will work better on Facebook as it is a lot more photo based that Twitter and the men will want to actually see this woman on the site rather than just hear about her day. A point to Facebook.
This final sketch I have drawn was designed for Facebook only, so for this poster it is an instant vote for Facebook.
After looking at there it is clear to see that my ideas will work better as a whole with Facebook as their client. Now I have decided this I can continue with my work and start drawing up some more ideas in Illustrator.
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